This guy knows what it's about. I used to listen to a lot of IDM and I mean your drums and shit, they aren't perfect. But this is mad different man, one of the best I've heard. Actually, no, lemme change it, dude this the best I heard. Props.
hehe I appreciate that man, this is one of my way older songs, I feel that my drum sequencing has improved quite a bit, if you've got time maybe check out one of my newer songs :D I just finished a remake of this one actually :D
No just no
Continue the beat at the beginning and take out whatever other god awful sounds you used. Add a bassline and some other random shit and you have yourself a song.
Next time :/
You had that minimal going at like 5:42 - 5:44 and I was digging it. That's what the whole fucking song should be. You definitely should get rid of that cymbal or whatever that is comes in around 0:40. Add in some more glitchy-er sounds or hats maybe. Once again, you have to lock into that groove or flow, which this song lacks. You did make a nice bass though I'll give you props on that. Keep in mind if you are wanting to produce true minimal, you should cut down on those sounds playing all at once. And once again you need to work on better breakdowns. Also, decide whether you are trying to produce minimal or tech house please, because the bass is sounding tech-y.
...needs to be fixed. It sounds god awful. The rest is so so, kind of sounds like mind numbing droning though. Nothing really jumps out at me melodically. I can also see what type of music you are trying to make and I can say that you need more groove. Those hats just aren't working, you need something that makes the song flow better. Plus, although it is chill house, those breakdowns were pretty weak. Work on all that and see what happens.
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